Fifth Grade - ELA
1: Relationships
Unit 1: Poetry
Lesson 1
What Is Poetry?
Students are asked to create metaphors and similes and to find visual imagery (Poetry Techniques and the Visual Imagery activity), which teaches descriptive techniques. Students are instructed to think about tone and the speed at which a poem should be read and to follow punctuation rather than line breaks when pausing (Memorizing Poetry), which addresses pacing. Students practice applying poetic devices such as onomatopoeia and alliteration to make language vivid, reinforcing descriptive writing skills.
Lesson 2
Parts of Speech and Rhymes in Poetry
Students identify and record adjectives and nouns from the poem "Watercolor Maine" and illustrate the adjective-noun combinations, practicing descriptive detail. Students brainstorm and list action verbs related to an animal and record strong verbs from "Gulls and Buoys," practicing verbs that develop movement and events. Students write an end-rhyme poem in their journals and are invited to write about ideas and events from their own lives, giving some practice in composing personal experiences.
Lesson 4
Haiku and Onomatopoeia
Students are asked to write a haiku that emphasizes imagery and sensory detail, with the Student Activity Page explicitly listing "imagery is important" and instructing a nature focus and a 5-7-5 pattern. Students identify onomatopoetic words and explain how repetition affects feeling, practicing sound-based descriptive techniques. Students also compose or extend a quatrain, practicing stanza construction and rhyme patterns that can contribute to descriptive development.
Lesson 5
Figurative Language and Voice
Students practice descriptive techniques by identifying and writing metaphors and by using concrete sensory details (listed under Skills and reinforced in the Metaphor activity). Students analyze point of view (first/second/third) across poems and reflect on the effectiveness of second person voice. Students write poems that use personification, attributing human traits to objects and thereby showing responses or feelings in those poems.
Lesson 6
Art and Poetry
The Skills section explicitly asks students to "Use concrete sensory details in writing," which directs students to practice descriptive techniques. Multiple questions and activities require students to identify and produce vivid images and figurative language (e.g., recording the simile in "Skier," describing which poem creates the most vivid image). Students are asked to write poems (two-couplet poem about their town and a poem with an illustration) and to decide line breaks for song lyrics when read as poetry, which gives limited practice with shaping lines that affect pacing.
Lesson 8
You Come Too
Students are asked to practice making "pictures with words" by cutting out images and writing grouped words and phrases to describe each picture, then combining them into poems (Activity 2). Students redraw imagery from a poem (Activity 1) and are prompted to explain which words helped them create their illustration. The Wrapping Up and Things to Review sections instruct students to focus on visual imagery, nouns, adjectives, action verbs, and figurative language to create pictures in readers' minds. A reading question asks students to identify whether poems in the book are narrative because they tell a story (Question #2).
Lesson 9
Write About What You Know
Students are asked in Activity 2 to "Write a free verse poem" and to "use vivid adjectives, interesting nouns, strong verbs, and visual imagery," which requires practicing descriptive techniques. The student activity pages include an entry labeled "N is for Narrative," indicating some attention to narrative form within the poetry exploration. The wrapping-up and parent-plan prompts ask students to discuss word choice and figurative language, prompting students to use description to convey experiences.
Final Project
Coffee House Poetry Reading
Students plan the order of poems in a program (The Program asks that the order of poems be well thought out). Students write a description of the setting (Part 2 asks them to "Write down a description of the setting"). Students practice oral delivery and pacing (Part 3 asks them to decide the "feel" of each poem and to practice tempo, volume, and phrasing) and the rubric includes items such as "Poems were read with feeling" and "Tone and volume were appropriate for each poem."
Unit 2: The View from Saturday
Lesson 1
The Academic Bowl
The Introducing the Lesson section tells students that the main story takes place in one afternoon and is interrupted by flashbacks that give insight into characters' pasts, explicitly pointing out non-linear plot structure and use of flashbacks. The Things to Review section asks students to review that the plot does not follow a traditional sequence, reinforcing awareness of pacing and narrative interruptions. Students also read chapters and answer comprehension questions about events and character backgrounds, which requires attention to how flashbacks develop events and character responses.
Lesson 3
Sea Turtles
Students are asked to finish Nadia's story and to compare Nadia's voice to Noah's voice, prompting attention to narrative voice and character perspective. In Activity 2, students write three interesting things they notice or learn about Nadia once they hear her story written in her voice and fill in the storyline for "Nadia's Story," which requires them to represent events and character responses. The Skills and Parent Plan sections direct students to analyze characters' traits, motivations, relationships, and changes they undergo.
Lesson 6
Adventures in Wonderland
Students are asked to "write your storyline for 'Ethan's Story'" and to exhibit an identifiable voice in personal narratives and stories, which directs them to produce narrative writing. Students identify and create similes and metaphors in the Metaphor and Simile activity and must include at least one simile or metaphor in a paragraph describing a friend, showing practice with descriptive techniques. Students analyze story elements (plot, setting, problem resolution) and complete activities that require describing characters and events, which supports development of experiences and events through description.
Lesson 7
Annie
Activity 2 explicitly teaches dialogue and stage directions: students are told that speaking between characters is called dialogue and that stage directions explain what characters are doing and should be placed in parentheses. Students are directed to pick a scene, write a script recording lines for each character and put stage directions in parentheses, and then gather family members to act it out. The provided example includes labeled character lines and parenthetical stage directions, modeling how to show actions and responses through scripted dialogue and directions.
Lesson 9
Kindness
Students are asked to describe the journey of each member of The Souls and what they found in a journal (Activity 2), which requires narrating events and discoveries. Students plan a Victory Celebration and dedicate a page to each person explaining why they selected a prize (Activity 3), which requires developing character traits and motivations. Students write about performing random acts of kindness (Activity 4) and answer comprehension questions about characters' actions and responses (Question #2), which involve recounting experiences and reflecting on characters' reactions.
Final Project
An Afternoon Tea
Students are asked to compose invitations that use strong verbs and include at least one simile or metaphor and one idiom, and the rubric explicitly assesses use of similes/metaphors and strong verbs. Students must write three sentences to present special tokens to each guest and practice saying them so they do not need to read, which gives practice in phrasing and spoken expression. Students reflect on how guests responded and how relationships changed, prompting consideration of characters' responses to events.
Unit 3: American Tall Tales and Legends
Lesson 2
Tales and Legends of the Northeast
Students identify and record descriptive words and phrases about three main women characters on character webs (Activity 2), which practices using description to develop character. Students find and create hyperboles in "Bess Call" (Activity 3), explicitly practicing a narrative technique (figurative exaggeration) used to develop events and characters. Students research John Chapman and write a bio-poem and retell Johnny Appleseed aloud when serving pie or dedicating a tree (Activities 4 and 6), which ask students to compose and orally present narrative material.
Lesson 3
Tales and Legends of the South
Students arrange mixed-up sentences in the Paragraph Organization activity, practicing logical sequencing of events and sentence flow. Students translate and create figures of speech in the Figures of Speech activity, practicing descriptive language and imagery. Students design a trickster character by naming an animal, describing traits, setting, nemesis, and a plot idea, which asks them to develop descriptive details and character responses.
Lesson 4
Tales and Legends of the Midwest
The Skills statement tells students to "consider how language brings characters to life and enhances plot development," and Activity 4 (Author's Language) asks students to list three sentences that helped bring John Henry to life. Reading comprehension questions prompt students to explain character motivations and responses (e.g., "Do you think John Henry should have challenged the machine? Why or why not?" and "What did John Henry mean when he said, 'I've got a man's heart in here...'?"). The Unnecessary Sentences activity requires students to identify irrelevant sentences, which engages them in analyzing sentence-level choices.
Lesson 5
Tales and Legends of the Southwest
Students are asked to outline a trickster tale in Activity 3, identifying the story setting, protagonist, antagonist, a human-like figure, and how the protagonist tricks the antagonist, which requires planning events and describing characters and setting. Activity 4 directs students to list ten geographic details about the Southwest, prompting descriptive work about setting. Activity 2 asks students to write a summary using transitional words and phrases (some at sentence-beginnings and some mid-sentence), which practices logical sequencing and cohesion that relate to pacing and event flow.
Lesson 6
Tales and Legends of the West
The Storytelling activity directs students to retell a legend aloud, practice using inflections, engaging tone, transition words, and interesting language, and to check that the sequence of events and character relationships are clear. The Ordering Paragraphs activity has students reorder paragraphs from "Hekeke," requiring them to reconstruct event sequence and thereby attend to pacing of events. The Story Book Jacket asks students to write a short summary for the back cover, which asks them to condense and describe events and characters.
Final Project
Your Own Tall Tale or Legend
Students plan story structure using a Story Plot Diagram that asks them to identify the problem, rising action, climax, falling action, and resolution, which guides pacing and event sequencing. Students record ten details about the setting and complete a character web to generate descriptive details about the main character. Students are directed to use transition words and to order actions so the story makes sense, and the rubric asks whether they used quotation marks correctly, which addresses the mechanics of dialogue.
2: Diversity and Interdependence
Unit 1: The Cay
Lesson 2
Curacao
Students are asked to identify and analyze the author's use of a simile in the opening sentence and to explain why that sentence serves as a hook, which targets descriptive technique. In Activity 2 students write first-sentence hooks for two books and two movies, practicing creation of an opening line that relies on description and word choice. The skills list and parent notes prompt students to "consider the ways language and visuals bring characters to life, enhance plot development, and produce a response," and reading questions require students to describe events and people from Chapters 1–2 in complete sentences.
Lesson 3
Overboard
Students practice translating and interpreting Timothy's dialect on the "Timothy's Voice" page, working directly with lines of dialogue to understand voice. Students rewrite a paragraph to vary sentence length and combine clauses (Option 1) and/or write a descriptive paragraph using strong verbs and vivid adjectives and varied sentence lengths (Option 2), practicing description and pacing. Students record sentences about Phillip and Timothy that focus on the characters' feelings, thoughts, and actions across chapters, showing character responses to events.
Lesson 4
Land
Students read Chapters 5 and 6 of The Cay and answer comprehension questions that probe character actions and perceptions (e.g., what Timothy thought he heard; Phillip depending on Timothy's descriptions). Students are asked to write sentences describing the two main characters on the "Phillip and Timothy" pages, which requires use of descriptive detail. The Parent Plan lists using mapping and webbing to organize ideas, and discussion questions prompt students to explain Timothy's beliefs and emotional responses, which engages analysis of character responses.
Lesson 5
Stranded
Students are asked to "pretend you have recently been diving and write in your journal about what you have seen and experienced," which directs them to create a written account of an experience using description. In Activity 3 students illustrate resources from the coral reef and "describe how they would use each resource," which has students develop events and responses related to survival. Part B and Part C of the prepositional-phrases page ask students to write sentences related to the novel and to begin sentences with prepositional phrases to make writing more interesting, encouraging descriptive elaboration.
Lesson 6
Work
Students read Chapters 9 and 10 and are asked to write a sentence or two describing the characters' attitudes and actions, which asks them to identify how characters respond to events. In the Comma Usage activity students add commas and quotation marks to lines of dialogue (e.g., "Phillip, you can help weave the mats."), so they work directly with dialogue form. In the Discrimination scenarios students write responses to situations that require them to consider character responses and moral reactions, tying character behavior to events.
Lesson 7
Different Cultures
Students read Chapters 11 and 12 of The Cay and answer comprehension questions that ask how characters respond to situations (e.g., how Timothy needs Phillip and how Phillip helps Timothy). The Varying Sentence Beginnings activity asks students to write a paragraph about being stranded on a deserted island and provides an example paragraph that includes description and a line of dialogue. Activity 3 asks students to list ways Timothy has helped Phillip and vice versa, prompting attention to characters' responses and interactions.
Lesson 8
Fishing
Students are asked to write journal entries 'pretend that you are Phillip' that describe the island using only touch, sounds, smells, and tastes, which requires use of sensory description and descriptive adjectives. Students are asked to write a second journal entry describing Timothy from Phillip's perspective based on what Phillip hears and what Timothy does, which requires showing character responses through actions and words. Students read Chapters 13 and 14 and write sentences describing the characters' feelings and actions toward one another, prompting analysis of character responses to situations.
Lesson 9
The Storm
Students are asked to identify the author's descriptive language about the storm (e.g., "Splintering sound, driving rain, raging whitecaps") in Reading Question #1. The writing rubric prompts students to use adjectives and interesting verbs to make writing more descriptive and to "hook" the reader, which targets use of descriptive techniques. Organizing pages require students to write topic sentences, supporting details, and elaboration, supporting practice in crafting descriptive content.
Lesson 10
Survival
Students are asked to revise their rough draft by varying sentence length, combining sentences, varying sentence beginnings, and selecting more interesting words to make writing more descriptive and engaging. Students must finish an essay about how Timothy and Phillip's relationship changed, which requires developing events and character responses over time. In Activity 3 students pretend to be Phillip and illustrate and describe three items that remind him of Timothy, practicing perspective-based description of a character's responses.
Final Project
For Timothy
Students are asked to write a first-person commemorative piece (pretend to be Phillip as an adult) and to compose a eulogy that describes how they and Timothy depended on each other and how Timothy changed their life, which requires narrative perspective and descriptive detail. Students must draft a monument inscription that reflects Timothy's character and design a monument that symbolically represents him, prompting use of descriptive language and characterization. The rubric and skills list require students to use details, examples, anecdotes, rehearse aloud, and employ emphasis, clarity, and appropriate voice when presenting the eulogy, which supports development of delivery techniques related to pacing and emphasis in oral presentation.
Unit 2: A House of Tailors
Lesson 1
German Immigrants
Students are asked to read the historical fiction A House of Tailors and to write in journal form, including an activity that asks them to "write as though the year is 1870" and list five things important for German immigrants to know. Students also write a short journal entry about what they learned regarding their family ancestry and share their findings with family members. The activities require students to adopt a historical perspective and produce first-person written responses.
Lesson 3
Journey to New York
Students answer questions that ask how Dina feels when she must leave for America and what her impressions of New York are, requiring them to identify character responses. Students answer a question asking how Dina describes her journey across the ocean, prompting them to note descriptive details (the storm, wind, people screaming). Activity 3 asks students to record details about the city and the lives of immigrants in 1870, which asks them to collect contextual and descriptive information about experiences and events. The cause-and-effect activity has students connect events and outcomes, supporting understanding of event sequences.
Lesson 4
Welcome to New York
Students analyze and collect the author's descriptive language by listing interesting adjectives and strong verbs from the text and sorting words and phrases by the five senses (Activity 1). Students record sensory details and then use those details to compose a paragraph describing a street, explicitly instructed to use interesting descriptive adjectives and strong verbs (Activity 3). The lesson prompts students to identify imagery that helps them picture scenes and to point out words that appeal to each sense during oral review.
Lesson 6
A New Hat
Students are asked to write a short journal entry describing a time they were embarrassed and how they felt, which asks them to use descriptive detail to convey experience and emotional response. Comprehension questions (e.g., How did Barbara respond when Dina told her what happened?) require students to identify and explain characters' responses to events. Vocabulary cube activities ask students to write sentences using targeted descriptive words, reinforcing descriptive language that can be used in narratives.
Lesson 7
Sickness
Students are asked to analyze an author's descriptive technique using the example "I felt fear in my mouth and my throat, my tongue so dry I could hardly answer as the men pounded on the door." The "Finding the Right Words" activity asks students to write 4–5 sentence moments that focus on making situations real for the reader, which practices concrete sensory description and moment-to-moment pacing. The Skills list and parent prompts explicitly require use of concrete sensory details and providing context so listeners can imagine the circumstances.
Lesson 8
Christmas
Students are directed to practice dialogue in Activity 2, which includes explicit rules for quotation marks and a prompt to "Write a conversation that could have occurred between Barbara and Dina on Christmas Eve," requiring them to produce dialogue with correct punctuation. Students complete the "Should I Stay or Go?" activity, listing reasons for Dina to stay or return, which asks them to articulate character responses to a situation. The lesson's skills list includes "Analyze characters' motivations," indicating students will consider and explain characters' reactions and decisions.
Lesson 9
A Letter
The Skills list explicitly tells students to "use concrete sensory details in writing," and the Word Choice rubric asks "Do I use words that appeal to the reader's senses?" Students are directed to organize three paragraphs (likes about New York, what they miss about Germany, and their decision), which requires developing experiences across a clear event sequence. The Mechanics rubric also asks "Do I use quotation marks correctly?", which prompts attention to the conventions needed for including dialogue.
Lesson 10
Fire!
Students answer Analyzing Writing questions that ask them to identify techniques the author uses to keep the reader interested, to create suspense (pacing), to use conflict/tension, and to give examples of descriptive language. Students complete an Adding Punctuation activity that requires them to punctuate dialogue and direct speech, with an answer key showing correct quotation marks and comma placement. In Activity 3 students illustrate five items they would save in a fire and explain their choices, which asks them to describe responses to a crisis.
Lesson 11
Living the American Dream
Students are asked to imagine writing a historical fiction novel and to create a book jacket (Activity 1), with Student Activity Page sections labeled "beginning of the story" and "development of the characters." Students answer comprehension questions that require analysis of character responses (e.g., why Dina had difficulty talking to Johann) and are asked to write from Dina's point of view in Activity 3 Option 2 using "If...then" statements and a short poem or song. The unit also includes review of comma and quotation mark rules, which could support use of dialogue in student writing.
Final Project
Today and Yesterday or Story Quilt
Students are asked to research and write poems that "vividly describe life in New York today" and to take notes on "vivid words and phrases that describe the city," which targets use of descriptive language. The Story Quilt requires students to represent "major events, conflicts, and showcase characters or symbols" and to "write your reaction to the story" and "record three reasons Dina stayed," which asks students to develop events and character responses in their squares. The Skills section also instructs students to "recite brief poems... or dramatic dialogues" and to use "effective rate, volume, pitch, and tone," giving students practice with oral techniques related to pacing and dialogue delivery.
Unit 3: My Side of the Mountain
Lesson 1
Preparing for the Adventure
Students complete a "My Survival Story" plot diagram in which they name characters and setting and outline the problem, rising action (three events), climax, falling action, and resolution, which requires organizing events and controlling sequence. In the Catskills activities students either draw seasonal plants and animals or write about seasonal tourist activities, which asks them to produce descriptive details about setting and environment. The author activity asks students to list personality traits and similarities, prompting descriptive writing about character-like qualities.
Lesson 4
A Baby Falcon
Students read pages of a narrative (My Side of the Mountain) and answer questions about events and character actions (e.g., the mother falcons attack, the weasel's unusual behavior). In Activity 1 students draw an animal and write descriptive sections: "Personality" and "Your relationship with the animal," requiring use of description to portray character traits and relationships. Parent/Wrap-up discussion prompts ask students to explain why Sam wants to make friends and how Sam's family might feel, prompting analysis of character responses.
Lesson 7
Newspaper Reporter
Students are asked to include direct quotes from their imaginary interview and to make the quotes sound like something Sam would say, which practices using dialogue. Students are prompted to use descriptions to make the scene come alive (describing Sam's appearance and the surroundings) and to provide plenty of details. The planning pages and paragraph organizers guide students to order information (who/what/when/where first, then how/why) and the rubric asks about varying sentence length and using transitional words to make ideas flow.
Final Project
Think-Tac-Toe
Students are asked to "Document your experience" in the "Living in Nature" activity, which requires composing a first-person account of surviving a year in the wilderness. Students are asked to "Create a plot diagram for the story, setting it in a different environment," which has them sequence events and adapt the plot. Students are asked to "Discuss Sam's friendships" and "describe its significance," which asks them to analyze and represent character responses to situations.
3: Discovery and Survival
Unit 1: The Witch of Blackbird Pond
Lesson 3
Meeting House
Students read Kit's modeled personal narrative that uses vivid description to convey feelings (e.g., "my face felt as red as fire," "people's eyes were piercing me," and "their whispers"). Students are instructed to write a short personal narrative in their journals about feeling embarrassed or anxious, which asks them to recreate an experience with descriptive language and emotional responses. Students are prompted to read their narratives aloud and to focus discussion on word choices that "draw the reader in" and make the experience exciting, emphasizing use of descriptive details to develop events and character responses.
Lesson 5
The Meadow
Students receive explicit instruction to "show, don't tell," with tips that directly name dialogue, description (appealing to the five senses), and action verbs as strategies. Students rewrite sentences to replace telling with showing and analyze an extended example that shows a character's emotional response through action. Students also plan and perform an acted scene that requires selecting stories with action and dialogue and practicing how characters respond.
Lesson 7
A Bird
Students are asked in Activity 1 to write a conversation between John Holbrook and Mercy and to use quotation marks correctly, explicitly connecting dialogue to characters' feelings and ideas. Activity 3 has students brainstorm descriptive phrases about a painting, practicing descriptive language. Activity 2 asks students to identify a metaphor comparing Kit to a Jamaican bird and to list ways Kit's experience parallels the bird, prompting analysis of characterization and descriptive comparison.
Lesson 8
New England in the Fall
Students identify and underline similes and circle personification in a descriptive passage and are asked to notice how the author's description appeals to the five senses (Activity 1). Students paint a scene and write three sentences using descriptive language, and later write a paragraph about a weather-related day, being told to "give enough details to show the reader what happened" (Activity 3). The parent/teacher prompts ask students to read their descriptive sentences aloud and discuss the figurative language and whether their word choices "showed or told" the reader.
Lesson 9
Halloween in the Colonies
Students are instructed in Activity 2 to "Use dialogue" and to "Appeal to the reader's five senses," and to use "action verbs and descriptive nouns (imagery)," which explicitly directs them to apply dialogue and description in their narratives. The tip "Don't tell how a character feels; describe actions that reveal emotion" directs students to show characters' responses to situations rather than merely stating feelings. The parent guidance asks caregivers to discuss the student's narrative and "focus...on the ideas and the descriptive language," reinforcing practice with descriptive techniques.
Lesson 10
A Witch Hunt
The Skills section explicitly asks students to "Edit and revise selected drafts to improve coherence and progression by adding, deleting, consolidating, and rearranging text" and to "Combine short or incomplete sentences with conjunctions," which focuses on revision and sentence combining. The Editing activity requires students to rewrite a paragraph correcting run-ons and fragments, giving concrete practice that affects sentence flow and pacing. Multiple comprehension and discussion questions ask students to explain characters' motivations and responses (e.g., why townspeople blamed Hannah; why Matthew defends Kit), prompting students to analyze character reactions to situations.
Final Project
Narrative Essay
Students are instructed to include feelings and specific sensory details and to use vivid, precise verbs when turning a memory into a story. Students are told to "show rather than tell" and the rubric specifically asks for words that appeal to the senses, strong verb usage, and use of adjectives and adverbs for interest. Students practice organizing narrative elements (beginning/middle/end or three elements) and are prompted to end body paragraphs with concluding sentences that provide feelings and reflections, showing characters' responses.
Unit 2: The Invention of Hugo Cabret
Lesson 2
Magic Tricks
Activity 3 instructs students to select a picture and "write the text that the picture is showing," explicitly asking them to "provide details about the action, the character's thoughts, and dialogue if it will be helpful" and to "use the same tone and voice as the author." Activity 2 requires students to write three first-person statements from Hugo's perspective describing life before and after his father's death, which asks students to show a character's responses to changing situations. The student activity pages and directions repeatedly prompt students to produce descriptive writing and include dialogue where appropriate.
Lesson 3
Memories
Students are asked in Activity 1 to write a personal memory in their journal, with explicit directions to "communicate your emotion and the details," which practices descriptive technique for developing an experience. Students read multiple excerpts of a Hans Christian Andersen tale that include dialogue and descriptive narrative, and Activity 3 has them compare two versions using a graphic organizer that prompts analysis of characters, setting, events, and mood/tone. Students also discuss parallels between Andersen and Hugo, which directs attention to how characters respond to circumstances.
Lesson 4
The Key
The lesson asks students to make up a story about a mysterious key and to "stand up and practice telling your story aloud using the appropriate voice and tone" and to "use body language to communicate excitement and other emotions." The Skills list requires students to "provide a context that enables the listener to imagine the circumstances of the event or experience" and to "recite brief poems... soliloquies or dramatic dialogues... using clear diction, tempo, volume, and phrasing." The "Things to Know" note tells students that good storytellers "use body language and adjust the pitch and tone of their voice to reflect what is happening in the story."
Lesson 7
Six Months Later
Students are asked to write a short creative story that integrates factual inspiration and are told to "think carefully about your word choice, creating suspense, vivid details, and action," which targets descriptive technique and elements of pacing. The Story Organizer asks students to plan Setting, Characters, Problem, three Events, and Resolution, which supports planning clear event sequences and pacing. The lesson skills list explicitly includes "Use concrete sensory details" and "Provide a context to enable the reader to imagine an event or experience," and Activity 3 asks students to describe discoveries and how those discoveries changed characters' lives, prompting attention to character responses.
Unit 3: The Ballad of Lucy Whipple
Lesson 1
From Massachusetts to California
Students read Chapters 1–2 of The Ballad of Lucy Whipple and the Author's Note, which model descriptive narrative and show how the protagonist's feelings are developed (the text notes the author "describes it in great detail"). Students answer comprehension questions that ask how California feels about living in California, reinforcing attention to character response. Students write a 6–8 sentence journal entry as a pioneer, describing observations, events, and feelings on their first night, which requires use of descriptive details to develop experience.
Lesson 5
A New Friend
Students are asked to rewrite a paragraph on the "Sentence Beginnings" page, explicitly beginning at least one sentence with a prepositional phrase, one with a transitional word or phrase, and one with a participle phrase, which develops sentence-level descriptive techniques. The Parent Plan lists skills to "elaborate ideas in writing by using prepositions" and to "combine short, related sentences with appositives, participial phrases, adjectives, adverbs, and prepositional phrases," which directs students to practice descriptive sentence constructions. Reading Chapters 9 and 10 and answering questions about Joe and Lucy requires students to engage with character events and responses at a comprehension level.
Lesson 8
Fire!
Students are asked to practice varying sentence lengths in Activity 2 to help their sentences flow, which addresses pacing. In Activity 3 students write a personal letter that recounts events and explicitly asks them to reflect on feelings and reactions, which asks them to show a character's response to situations. The lesson also models letter-like journal entries that recount important events and emotions.
Lesson 9
The Sandwich Islands
The lesson explicitly directs students to identify character information through dialogue, description, actions, interactions, and thoughts ("Things to Know"). Activity options ask students to record a quote and other characters' reactions and to write three descriptive words or phrases for selected characters, which requires attention to dialogue and description. Activity 2 has students write questions for Lucy and then write answers in her voice, asking them to produce character responses and adopt narrative voice.
4: Systems
Unit 1: A Wrinkle in Time
Lesson 1
A Unique Family
Students are asked in the "Hooking the Reader" activity to compose opening sentences that use imagery, strong verbs, figurative language, and may begin with dialogue, character description, or action. Students are directed to pick three favorite novels and write their own first sentence or two to "hook" the reader, recording these in a journal. The activity and parent prompts require students to share and describe what makes each beginning an effective hook.
Lesson 2
Calvin
Students analyze characters by completing the "Characterizing Meg" graphic organizer, writing three traits and three pieces of textual evidence for each trait. In Activity 3 students describe an illustrated scene, brainstorm multiple ideas, select the most original one, and elaborate on it in detail, which practices descriptive development. Reading comprehension questions ask students to explain characters' motivations and reactions (e.g., why Meg is doing poorly, what Calvin felt), prompting attention to characters' responses to situations.
Lesson 3
Mrs. Whatsit, Mrs. Who, and Mrs. Which
Students create three science-fiction plot ideas with a beginning, middle, and end (Activity 3) and are told to make characters' actions make sense. Students complete fill-in-the-blank exercises that use quotes containing dialogue and descriptive passages from the novel (Activity 2). Questions ask students to identify family members' functions and character roles, prompting them to describe character responses and roles.
Lesson 4
Tesser
Students practice descriptive language by underlining vivid words in L'Engle's creature passage and illustrating the creature from that description, and they are asked to write detailed descriptions of an original fantastical creature. Students practice pacing and sequence by rewriting sentences with transitional words and phrases (categories include time and sequence) and by combining short sentences into smoother, time-ordered versions. Students plan narrative events and character responses by selecting or creating a protagonist, identifying the protagonist's mission, listing three obstacles, and mapping problem/solution on a story map.
Lesson 5
The Thing
Students orally tell a continuing story about an alien who has landed on Earth and then revise and extend that story when an adult adds new constraints (alien has monkey attributes, family is afraid, alien is from the future). Students are told they will write a science-fiction short story in the unit and are encouraged to watch genre films to notice story elements. Students read Chapter 5 and answer questions about characters and events, showing attention to how characters respond to situations (for example, reactions to tessering and the Dark Thing).
Lesson 6
Camazotz
Students are asked to elaborate simple sentences using descriptive language (verbs, adjectives, adverbs, prepositional phrases, and conjunctions) in the Elaboration activity, which practices description. Students use a graphic organizer to describe an antagonist's looks, behavior, thoughts, and statements and to list three ways the antagonist will try to harm the protagonist, which practices showing character responses and motivations. The introduction prompts discussion about how characters are growing and changing, encouraging students to think about character development and reactions to events.
Lesson 7
Man with the Red Eyes
Students read and work with a summary that contains clear sequencing and transitional phrases and are asked to circle those transitional words (Activity 2). Students are asked to edit a paragraph by adding transitional words or phrases and to rewrite the paragraph with corrected verb forms and added transitions (Activity 3). The provided summary and student pages include descriptive phrases (for example, "a great entrance hall filled with men in business suits" and "a man with red eyes") that students read and analyze while practicing sequencing.
Lesson 8
Father
Students are asked to develop a science-fiction setting by writing the time and place, describing geography, life forms, and way of life, and illustrating the setting on a story map, which practices descriptive technique. Students read Chapters 8–9 and answer comprehension and interpretive questions (e.g., why Charles Wallace is different, why Meg's father is in a transparent column) that require them to analyze characters' experiences and responses. The parent plan and course goals ask students to "read for varied purposes" and to "discover models for one's own writing," which encourages students to notice narrative techniques in the text.
Lesson 9
The Beasts
Students practice descriptive technique in Activity 1 "Communicating with the Beasts" by writing descriptions that avoid visual details, forcing them to use sensory and conceptual description. Activity 3 asks students to record how a theme might affect characters' thoughts and actions and to provide examples of characters' actions, words, and author descriptions in support of a theme. The Theme graphic organizers direct students to collect characters' actions or words and author's descriptions, which asks students to identify how characters respond to situations.
Final Project
Science Fiction Short Story
Students are told that "dialogue is one of the most important tools" and are explicitly instructed to "try to use effective descriptions and dialogue," with concrete tips (varying tags, placement, and paragraphing) for writing dialogue. Students complete a plot diagram that requires listing the problem, major events, climax, and solution and are told to introduce the problem early and limit events to three or four, which guides pacing and event sequencing. The rubric requires use of descriptive language for vivid visualization and a clear beginning, middle, and end, reinforcing instruction in description and organization.
Unit 2: Lincoln
Lesson 5
Emancipation
Students are prompted to write a Frederick Douglass biopoem that asks for adjectives, feelings, fears, accomplishments, and hopes, which requires descriptive language and reflection on character responses. In the Stovepipe Hat activity, students write character trait words/phrases and then write a quotation or sentence beneath each flap describing an event that reflects that trait, requiring them to connect events to character reactions. The activities also ask students to record note cards of important events and to copy and explain important lines from the Emancipation Proclamation, which involves selecting and explaining meaningful descriptive passages.
Lesson 6
Civil War
Students are asked in Activity 3 to "pretend that you are a slave" and write a short letter to Lincoln describing childhood events or experiences and arguing why slavery should end, which requires adopting a character's perspective and developing personal events. Students also plan and summarize interviews (Activities 5–7) and answer reflective questions about motivations and reactions to the war, giving practice in recounting experiences and showing responses of people to historical situations.
Unit 3: Independent Study
Lesson 6
Developing a Product
Students are asked to choose from Product Options that include narrative formats such as Dramatization (create and act out a script), Story Book (write an interesting story with facts), Comic Strip, Video, and Computer Cartoon/Movie, which require creating characters and events. Students plan, create, and present these products (Activities 2, 4, and 5), including writing scripts or reading story books aloud to an audience.
