HOMESCHOOL AND DISTANCE LEARNING
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1: Semester 1

Unit 1

Unit 1: The Pearl

Students are prompted to learn and use new vocabulary words and to write their own sentences for each word (Vocabulary pages with example sentences and blank spaces for student-created sentences). The Skills section states students will 'Extend vocabulary knowledge by learning and using new words' and 'Identify, use, and understand the function of different parts of speech,' which requires students to select appropriate words and consider part of speech when composing sentences. Students answer short response questions about Steinbeck's life, which requires producing written responses using chosen language.
Students are directed to analyze Steinbeck's use of strong verbs and vivid adjectives (Activity 2 and the Verbs and Adjectives CHART) and to decide which descriptive wording is more effective (e.g., "The girl ate her lunch." vs. "The girl gobbled down her lunch."). The lesson explicitly tells students to be selective with adjectives and that "too many adjectives can weigh down a piece of writing and make it too wordy," and it advises them to "choose precise and interesting adjectives." Students also practice editing sentences for correctness (Activity 1) and learn about coordinate adjectives and comma usage, which supports more careful word choice.
The Parent Plan Skills explicitly state that students should "Choose language that is precise, engaging, and well suited to the topic and audience." Students are directed to write a one-page script for an oral presentation and to create a travel brochure meant to "provide information and to entice people," which requires selecting appropriate wording. Option 2 cautions, "If you just state a lot of facts, you may lose the interest of your audience," prompting students to craft engaging language rather than merely listing facts.
Students are asked in Activity 1 to copy given sentences and correct grammar, spelling, and punctuation, and suggested corrections are provided (e.g., changing "well liked" to "well-liked," fixing spelling, and adjusting clause punctuation). Students are also asked to add sentences and phrases to a stylistic device log and to consider how each one affects the reader, which engages them in noticing word choices and stylistic effects. Students develop and answer a variety of question types about the chapter, which requires them to compose questions with clear wording.
Students identify and mark prepositional, appositive, and verbal phrases in sentences (Activity 1) and label how verbal phrases function, which requires attention to how phrases contribute meaning. Students review a grammar chart that defines phrase types and their grammatical functions. The Parent Plan states students will apply parts of speech to clarify language usage, linking phrase-level analysis to clearer expression.
Students are told a parable should be "short and to-the-point," and the lesson repeatedly asks students to keep the plot focused and avoid too many characters or situations. The Parable Rubric includes a "Voice/Word Choice" category and Content/Organization asks for "lively verbs" and a variety of stylistic devices (similes, metaphors, figurative language), which directs students to make deliberate word choices. The editing and revising activity asks students to apply proofreading symbols and make corrections, and students are instructed to produce a polished final copy after revision.
Unit 2

Unit 2: A Girl Named Disaster

The lesson defines the writing-process stages including Revising (students "look for problems with issues such as organization, focus, and support for ideas") and Proofreading (students "check your paper for errors in spelling, grammar, and punctuation"). The Skills section includes "Identify errors in written English," and students complete freewriting and drafting activities that feed into revision and proofreading.
Students copy and correct sentences in Activity 1, fixing punctuation, contractions, possessives, spelling, and word choice (e.g., changing "Ill" to "I'll," "Pumkin" to "Pumpkin," and "profowned" to "profound"). The provided answer key shows students replace a run-on with two clearer sentences and choose more appropriate verbs and word forms ("lied" to "lay," removing an extraneous comma). These tasks require students to select more accurate words and restructure sentences for clarity.
The lesson rubric and instructions explicitly ask for strong word choice and vivid words and phrases (including interesting adjectives and strong verbs) and include a rubric category labeled "Word Choice." The activities tell students not to include too many details that don't contribute to the plot and prompt students to develop editing and revision strategies. The rubric also assesses sentence fluency and conventions, which relate to crafting clear sentences.
The Parent Plan lists a skill to "choose language that is precise, engaging, and well suited to the topic and audience," which directly relates to selecting precise language. The drafting guidance tells students to "use sensory details -- no boring words" and to "use a thesaurus to find synonyms for some adjectives and verbs," which prompts students to select stronger, more precise vocabulary when composing. The activities require students to write a 400-500 word personal narrative and to begin drafting, giving students an opportunity to apply word choice while composing.
The Skills section explicitly instructs students to "revise drafts to ensure precise word choice" and to "choose language that is precise, engaging, and well suited to the topic and audience." Activity 2 directs students to focus on improving word choice and offers revision strategies (putting the draft aside, reading aloud) to help them notice language issues. The Revision Checklist (Style) prompts students to use strong verbs, figurative language, and vary sentence length, which supports attention to careful word selection.
Students are asked to "review the activity pages you have done on editing and revision" as part of studying for the unit test, indicating they will revisit editing/revision work. Part III of the Student Activity Page asks students to identify the four parts of the writing process and to "explain the difference between revising and proofreading," and the answer key states that revising involves looking for problems with content, organization, and style. The lesson repeatedly requires students to revise and prepare a personal narrative for oral presentation, implying opportunities to work on writing choices while practicing.
Unit 3

Unit 3: The Hobbit

Students work with a vocabulary grid that identifies definitions, parts of speech, synonyms, and antonyms for targeted words, requiring them to choose alternate word choices. Students roll a cube task that can prompt them to "Use Correctly in a Sentence" or "Recite the Definition," which has them produce sentences using chosen words. Students write brief summaries on the "Events of the Journey" pages, requiring them to record short sentences that convey key events concisely.
Students practice combining independent clauses using commas and coordinating conjunctions on the "Working with Independent Clauses" page and answer items that ask which conjunctions would work. The materials prompt students to consider sentence length and rhythm (noting a sentence might seem "too long" if joined) and ask them to avoid repeating the same conjunction to prevent repetition. The lesson also points out when a comma is or is not needed, prompting students to judge and revise sentence structure.
Students are directed to use a thesaurus to find synonyms and alternately word choices (Skills and Activity 2), and they record synonyms in a chart when creating a riddle. Students practice word choice when they list associated words and then look up synonyms for those words on the 'Writing Your Own Riddle' pages. Students revise riddle clues by 'switching wording and adding details,' which requires selecting different words and phrasing.
Students are asked to combine independent clauses into complex sentences by making one clause dependent and by using subordinating conjunctions (Activity 1 and answer key examples). Students revise a paragraph to "make the paragraph flow more smoothly" and are directed to vary methods, including beginning sentences with dependent clauses (Option 2). The lesson explicitly notes that creating dependent clauses can "fix a run-on sentence error," prompting students to edit sentence-level structure.
Students are given explicit directions to "choose an appropriate transition expression and remove unnecessary words" when joining clauses (Part II of Option 1). Students practice revising run-on sentences by combining clauses with semicolons, transitional expressions, periods, coordinating or subordinating conjunctions (Option 2), which requires selecting wording that fits the intended relationship. Answer keys and suggested revisions show students forming tighter sentences (e.g., using "; in fact," or "; moreover,") and rewriting sentences into complex or semicolon+transition forms.
Students are asked to write a two- or three-sentence summary of early reviews in Activity 1, which requires them to express ideas briefly. The Student Activity Page asks students to write example compound and complex sentences and to identify run-ons and fragments, which practices tightening sentence structure. The Parent Plan prompts students to read aloud their summaries and identify literary elements, encouraging concise oral expression of ideas.
Students are told explicitly to avoid many "I" statements (e.g., replace "I think the setting was very effective..." with "The setting was very effective...") and to use present tense, indicating attention to word choice and concision. Students are required to edit and revise their drafts, using an editing-symbols chart and the Handy Guide to Writing, and to improve sentence quality during revision. The rubric evaluates "Writing Style: Clarity, organization, and sophistication," which asks students to produce clear and organized language.
Unit 4

Unit 4: A Single Shard

Students read definitions and insert specific vocabulary words into a contextual paragraph in the "Vocabulary Words in Context" activity, practicing selection of words like connoisseur, chrysanthemum, noxious, emissary, skepticism, trepidation, insolence, and arduous to fit nuanced meanings. The provided answer key shows those precise word choices placed to match intended meanings in sentences. The "Things to Review" direction asks students to use each vocabulary word in a sentence, giving additional practice in selecting and applying precise vocabulary.
The lesson repeatedly tells students to write brief summaries and avoid unnecessary detail (e.g., "A summary is a brief account..." and "Do not include too many details"). It instructs students to "try to stick to two or three sentences per page" while reading and to "restate ideas and events in your own words" rather than copying, which encourages concise selection of content. The summary strategies list and checklist (who did what, what events) focus students on isolating main ideas and omitting extraneous material.
Students are asked to write clear, simple, logically sequenced directions (Activity 1: Steps for Making Pottery) and the guidance explicitly states "The writing should [be] clear and simple." The Sentence Correcting activity requires students to copy and correct sentences for grammar, spelling, and punctuation, with model corrections provided that show revised wording and punctuation.
Students are asked to change incorrect pronouns or rewrite sentences on the Pronoun Agreement activity, which requires them to reword sentences (for example, rewriting "Everyone thought the prize would be theirs" as "The students all thought the prize would be theirs"). The lesson explicitly models rewording to avoid awkward gendered pronouns (suggesting "his or hers" be avoided by rephrasing). The wrap-up and review prompt students to supply alternative phrasings (e.g., rewriting "If anyone wants to enter the race, they must fill out a form" as "People who want to enter the race must fill out a form").
Students practice identifying and correcting unclear pronoun antecedents in Activity 1 (Pronoun Reference) by rewriting sentences so the antecedent is explicit. The lesson gives concrete strategies students can apply: eliminate the problem pronoun, replace it with the noun (or a quotation), or reword the sentence to make the referent clear. The "This is a Little Vague" section has students clarify vague references like "this" or "which" by specifying the noun being referred to.
Students practice sentence-level editing in the "Sentence Correcting" activity where they copy and correct sentences for grammar, spelling, punctuation, and word choice (e.g., correcting prefered to preferred, adding possessive apostrophes). Students paraphrase Crane-man's quotes on the "Quotes" page, putting meaning into their own words, and they create their own short "words of wisdom," which requires composing concise aphorisms for a younger audience.
Students are instructed to "stick to the action and do not have too many characters or too much detail" when drafting their short fox story and to "focus your attention on telling the story," which encourages concise narrative. The wrapping up prompts ask students what they found challenging about the assignment, prompting reflection on their writing choices. The lesson also asks students to summarize assigned reading, an activity that can require condensing information.
Students are asked to complete a Sentence Correcting activity in which they copy and correct sentences; the provided answers show revised word choices, punctuation, and clearer phrasing. In the Relationship Words activity, students cut out and select words from magazines to describe relationships, requiring them to choose specific descriptive vocabulary and support those choices with textual examples. The Relationship Web requires students to write at least two sentences per relationship and include one adjective on connecting lines, prompting attention to word choice and precise description.
The Parent Plan skills state that students will "revise writing to improve organization and word choice after checking the logic of the ideas and the precision of the vocabulary," which directs students to attend to precise vocabulary. Activity 5 (Editing and Revising) asks students to read their paragraphs and make changes using an editing symbols chart that includes 'Delete word (strikethrough)' and 'Wrong word (ww),' giving students tools to remove unnecessary or incorrect words. The conclusion guidance tells students to "summarize the paper without repeating specifics," which asks students to practice concision and avoid redundancy.
Unit 5

Unit 5: Independent Study

Students are asked to write an argumentative essay and to refer regularly to an "Argumentative Essay Rubric" that includes a "Word Choice" category described as evaluating the use of precise and effective language. Students are instructed to review the rubrics throughout the independent study process and to use them to focus attention on criteria for the essay. Students also develop presentations and visual aids, which are assessed for clarity and effectiveness, encouraging attention to language choices.
Students generate and revise argumentative essay questions using the "Just Right Questions" criteria and the "Focusing Your Topic" rubric, which ask them to make questions focused, open-ended, and important. Students write their essay question on activity pages, assess whether it is focused, and revise the question based on rubric feedback. Students use the KWM chart to articulate what they know and what they want to know, which requires them to state their topic and questions clearly.

2: Semester 2

Unit 1

Unit 1: Greek Myths

The lesson asks students to "Summarize the Greek creation story in two sentences," which directly requires students to express ideas concisely. The Beyond Roots II activities have students learn precise meanings of roots and words, supporting more accurate word choice. The parent note about translating Greek letters asks students to use "thinking skills to form the most likely translation," which involves selecting precise language when equivalents are not direct.
Students perform a Sentence Editing activity in which they copy and correct sentences for grammar, spelling, punctuation, and word choice (Activity 1). The parent notes on those corrections call attention to precise word choice (for example, distinguishing "shone" from "shined"). In Activity 4 students must write a short play limited to 18–25 lines and are instructed to tell the story through dialogue and stage directions rather than a running narrator, which requires concise dialogue and precise staging language.
Students complete a Sentence Editing activity in which they copy and correct sentences for grammar, punctuation, and word choice, with provided corrected versions. Students also write a 60–90 second trailer script for a Hercules movie, which constrains them to express ideas briefly and grab attention within a short time limit. Students create Venn diagrams and compare stories, an activity that requires selecting and summarizing key similarities and differences.
The Skills section explicitly tells students to "Revise drafts to ensure precise word choice and vivid images" and to "Edit drafts for grammar, mechanics, and spelling." The Begin Draft directions tell students to "select your words carefully," and the rubric evaluates "Voice and Creativity" including use of creative language and the "Conventions" category checks proper use of punctuation and effective paragraph breaks. The Edit and Revise part requires students to use proofreading symbols and the rubric to check and improve their writing.
Unit 2

Unit 2: Tales from the Middle Ages

Students take on the role of a Line Locator and find three to five lines or short passages they think reflect good writing, recording page and paragraph numbers and explaining why they selected them. Students complete a Sentence Combining activity in which they combine sets of sentences into a compound sentence and then into a complex sentence, with permission to "make small additions/changes as needed."
Students are prompted in Activity 1 to elaborate sentences by adding adjectives, adverbs, prepositional phrases, and descriptive clauses, and to rewrite two given sentences in their journals with more detail. The guidance lists specific ways to add detail (sensory adjectives, adverbs of manner/time, prepositional phrases, relative clauses, verbal phrases). The parent directions ask adults to check that students went beyond just adding a couple of adjectives, and the wrap-up reminds students to review ways of elaborating sentences.
Students practice choosing correct words in the "Frequently Confused Words" activity by finding and correcting homophone and contraction errors in a multi-sentence paragraph (Part I) and by writing sentences that use homophone groups correctly (Part II). The lesson gives explicit tips about apostrophes and contractions (e.g., avoid contractions in formal writing; check apostrophes for possessives vs. contractions), which guides students to select correct word forms. The Relationships activity asks students to write one or two sentences for each box, prompting concise responses when comparing beginning and end states of relationships.
Students are asked to summarize each character's monologue in 1–2 sentences on the Cast of Characters chart, which requires concise expression of ideas. Activity 1 has students revise and correct sentences for parallel structure, tense consistency, and active vs. passive voice, asking them to rewrite sentences (e.g., change nonparallel lists, correct tense shifts). The parent plan and skills list explicitly emphasize sentence-level choices (parallel structures and consistent tenses), which involves students making deliberate edits to sentence form.
Students write 3–5 short sentences describing an outdoor object, then re-examine the item to add details (elaboration) and combine shorter sentences to add sentence variety and prevent choppiness. The activity instructs students that their final description does not need to be long and asks them to read the description aloud to a parent for evaluation. The Parent Plan asks an adult to confirm that the student has thoughtfully added details and varied sentence structure.
Students expand simple sentences by adding specific how/when/where details to create more precise descriptive predicates (the "Painting Sentences" activity shows combining expansions into a painted predicate). Students circle and "paint" the subject by choosing modifiers (which/what kind of/how many/whose) and pick individual words to enhance, practicing more exact word choice. Students are instructed to "refine wording," "work with words or phrases," and to select which sentences to paint, which asks them to make deliberate wording choices.
Unit 3

Unit 3: The Prince and the Bard

Students cut out and recombine sentence blocks and replace omitted material with ellipses (Option 1), practicing deliberate omission to make a paragraph coherent. Students are asked in Option 2 to omit words or sentences from chosen passages and write the resulting text, and to find and analyze examples where the author uses ellipses. Students write a 30-second persuasive message from the flower, which requires composing a very brief spoken script.
Students complete an Activity 1: Sentence Editing task where they copy sentences and correct grammar, spelling, and punctuation, and they are shown corrected versions in the Parent Plan. The Parent Plan lists a skill to "Paraphrase the major ideas and supporting evidence," and Activity 2 asks students to "describe in your own words" the little prince's departure when creating a poem or drawing. The Student Activity Page prompts students to answer targeted questions (e.g., "What else could the narrator say to persuade the fox?") that require choosing words to convey perspective and evidence.
Unit 4

Unit 4: Newton at the Center

Students are asked to summarize readings and identify main ideas and significant details (Activities: Graphics and Summaries; multiple reading question sets). Students must write ordered steps for drawing an ellipse and have a parent follow only those written or oral directions (Making Ellipses / Explaining Ellipses), and they must give a 2-minute-or-less oral summary of page 163 that focuses on main idea and graph interpretation. The lesson repeatedly instructs students to decide which information to emphasize and to take concise notes rather than mark the text.
Students are asked to summarize events from the text and determine important information, which requires selecting relevant language. Students are asked to write headlines and topic sentences for two perspectives on an event, an activity that requires concise phrasing. Students may also write a brief description of an event in the provided activity box, practicing condensation of information into a short form.
Students are asked to "summarize for your parent how an airplane wing works" and to "deliver an oral summary with inferences and conclusions," which require condensing information. The lesson has students take notes on important information and unfamiliar words while reading and to answer comprehension questions in complete sentences. Students practice sentence diagramming (compound constructions, verbals, infinitives, participles), which builds awareness of sentence structure and word function.
Students are asked to summarize information orally (Activity 5) and to write a 1–2 paragraph sidebar about an artist (Activity 6), which requires selecting and condensing important information. In Option 2 of the tense activity, students must rewrite four sentences from the chapter and are told they may "make creative changes in wording" so the new sentence makes sense. Activity 7 directs students to read back over their sidebar and check for grammar errors, giving them an opportunity to edit their own writing.
Students are asked to revise and edit their essays (Activity 7) and to use an editing symbols chart that includes marks for deletion and correction, giving them tools to remove or change wording. The parent plan and skills description state the final essay should contain "no extraneous information or inconsistencies," which directs students to avoid unnecessary content. The Outlining Newton pages instruct students to use an outline and refer to it while writing to "keep the paper clear and organized," promoting focused content.
Unit 5

Unit 5: British Poetry

Students choose specific figurative language (metaphor, simile, personification) for images they photograph and then write a poem using those devices, which requires selecting descriptive words. The lesson explicitly asks students to "consider the connotation that your words carry" while writing, and the "Things to Know" section defines connotation and other word-meaning concepts. Students also analyze poets' language in reading questions and note examples of similes and metaphors from texts.